The First Date

else..." his legs trembling, his hands holding his rose at the back. "Oh, I see..."The lady turns away and he quickly grasps the chance to slip a



Back to his study, he turns on his computer and changes his motto as follows: "I will never believe the virtual romance any more!!!" And what he does next is to put Red Rose into his blacklist.



With a long sigh, he sits down, tired and hopeless. Although it＇s sunny outside, he feels his life in an endless darkness.
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网络世界，想必大家都非常熟悉或热衷吧!这篇叙事文给我们讲述了一段网络带来的阴差阳错的恋爱故事。哑然失笑之后，我们心里是否还会留下点什么呢?也许，虚拟世界中并不只是无穷的乐趣?


文章构思巧妙，语言平实，表达流畅，节奏明快，生动幽默，有声有色，可读性强，寓意深刻。值得一提的是主人公的心理刻画真实、准确、到位。一个心情经历波澜起伏，由喜转悲的少年的气恼的、狼狈的却又无奈的形象跃然纸上，令人忍俊不禁。一般现在时的使用使文章更显生动、传神。当然，若能再略施笔墨，对剧中人物，尤其是“old lady”添加一些描写，相信更能形成理想与现实的落差，突出对比的效果。

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