edom by someone outside my world. I hate to find myself wearing the coat from some strange guys with the angel wings still in the gesture to fly. I want to fly, not with the borrowed wings, but mine.
He will arrive at last, with his wings above my sky.
In 8 days I will have my 20th birthday, smiling shiningly in my autumn, murmuring the verses I changed myself,
Love,
When you come with the burning lamp of pain in your hands,
I can see your face
Without touching your hands,
And know you as a dream.
简 评
作者人生之帆刚刚扬起,渴望友情,爱情,期待白马王子从天而降。可是阅历浅,经验少,看错人本属人之常情。作者以亲身经历表明,爱情不能光靠等待,同时还应该不断充实自己,不断认识自我。作者利用空余时间写诗,听音乐,阅读名著,希冀自己的翅膀早日飞起来。作者深信她的白马王子会到来为她保驾护航。
作者第二段使用disheartening和fruitless说明当时的心情是灰色的,接着第三段描写怎样对待爱情,怎样排遣失意后的郁闷,用pervading表明love是一直存在的,只不过没有属于自己的罢了。
个别地方值得商榷,如which conversely seemed to me a nice thing令人费解。
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