国庆节 The National Day

国庆节 The National Day

The night of Shanghai has never appealed to me. City born and city bred, I＇ve got tired of the brightness of neon signs and the grandeur of skyscrapers in Shanghai.
But on this year＇s National Day, I spent a whole night roaming Nanjing Road and the Bund the symbol of the modern material Shanghai, with my roommates. It＇s the first time that I went out with them. With the huge amount of tourists, we could only wander with the cluster of people, having no destination. In the crowd, we entertained ourselves singing, joking and chatting, leaving all the worries, pressures and unhappiness behind,until mid night. Tired as we were, we still felt very happy. My roommates were quite impressed by the beauty, prosperity and the liveliness of Shanghai. But for me, all these were none of my business. What I treasured was the time I shared with them though that night Shanghai was so charming that she seemed to be one of the leading cities in the world.
It was the friendship that made the night of National Day especially enjoyable and memorable. Because I know that after a few years, my roommates and I may spread out across the world. But I think, that night, we had stockpiled memories like firewood, knowing that, one day, we would gather to relight the blaze of our friendship at the same place.

简 评
高峰同学的这篇作文构思很巧妙，在文章开头就宣布自己对上海的繁华已经熟视无睹，并进而将繁华的物质世界和与朋友共度的欢乐时光进行了对比，更加鲜明地

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